to spit out the words
matching the rhythm of heartbeat
to a system of muttered flaws
choking on the truth still caught in your throat
clasping moist palms to cold surfaces
eyes dart left. eyes dart right.
the air is thick with answers
visible only when tongue trips, pulse races.
heavy limbs move like molasses
through ever-thinning oxygen
a ticking clock that never existed
sounds more like an eminent explosive
time hangs alone in silence.
you do not speak. you do not move.
muscle meets newly dampened lip
a wayward smile, and you are safe.
thought it might somehow tie in to dante. exploring the sin of lying? rather loose connection but i tried.
5 comments:
Ilove this poem, boo. Better be at the creative writing meeting on Tuesday after school. Also--I hope others use the blog for a forum for their creative writing as well as their analytical posts.
I also loved this poem.
I like this poem! It got me to thinking about other things that could have a connection with the inferno.
Have you heard the song Love Me Dead by Ludo?? I love that song and when I was listening to it earlier today it reminded me of our talk today in class about the shewolf and how it reminds most of us as a coke addicted prostitute but you feel as though Dante feels bad for her when he says, "... a starved horror ravening and wasted beyond all belief."
If you haven't heard Love Me Dead by Ludo you can listen to it on my blog or you should google it cause I really like it lol.
I really like this poem. I think you should get it published!
thank you all for the kind words :)
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